This is actually pretty interesting, You are just starting out so I can't be that harsh! I would clarify this as an ambient mixed with industrial but probably experimental would fit both. Now, as far as i can see you like to play with noises and white noise in general, but you can EQ with some equalizer (Parametric EQ 2) and cut the high frequencies a bit to make it sound more clear and not that crispy, you could probably add sidechain on the sounds, so it would make the kick pumpier and obviously add some melodies! more variety, currently it has a good dark feeling as a song, but you have to add more and more, chords, progressions, etc